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John by AloeMeh John by AloeMeh
I really need some practic.
Also i need a critic. 
Used Paint Tool SAI
Homestuck by Andrew Hussy
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AriesMelody Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
So cool! OwO
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AloeMeh Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist
Thanks, dude <з
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AriesMelody Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
Aww, you're welcome  Meow :3 
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MahouShoujoOfPotato Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I love these colors! Pretty <33
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AloeMeh Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist
Thank you <з
Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] 
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keybladeschosenone Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the colors that you used in this piece of art. <3
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AloeMeh Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist
awww
Thanks <з
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this is truly amazing

however since you asked for some critique i am going to provide you some.

really, there's not much to critique here exactly; the chosen colors are beautiful and i love how you made john really shine in this. the clouds are beatifully messy.

BUT

the color of his skin and his shoes stand out a bit too much for me, they need to have a bit more purple in them to really fit the background. same with his godtier clothes but not so much since blue and purple are already close to one another. if the light is supposed to be a bright pink you should keep this consistently  - but you only did this with his pants and his hoodie, and even with the pants it is only a small part. however that's not how light works.

the way you colored the skin with his arms is pretty, but you should have tried to do the same with his face.

and then i have a few issues with the clothing, specifically his t-shirt and his hoodie. the "lower fold" if you can call it that is awkwardly big - sure, there is obvious air flowing in it, but that should count for the entire t-shirt and not just that place. his hoddie is too "edgy"; it is fabric, it's supposed to flow.

the anatomy is good, but his torso is too wide, and therefore his crotch is too far down there.

otherwise GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB. i love this.
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AloeMeh Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Hobbyist
Thank you sooo much *^*
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You explained everything very understandable and write so great comment for me... It really helped me, thanks again  <З
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candy-nubbies Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016
you're welcome!! i'm glad it helped you! uvu
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QueenPeaceKitty Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*Raises hand*
If you need someone to critique you I could try-
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AloeMeh Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Hobbyist
Wow, really? It's would be GREAT! *^*
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Luon-non Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016
KALSJDLAKSDJ The background ♥♥♥ I like it uvu<3
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AloeMeh Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist
Wow, thank you *^*
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MokyChan Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love the colors
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AloeMeh Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist
Thanks <з
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MokyChan Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
youre welcome! ♥
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AllmiZ Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is amazing OvO
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AloeMeh Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist
Thank you, dude <з
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AllmiZ Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yw ;u;
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YumeQueen Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016
Wow
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